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Subject: RE: [office] "you can"
hello all, i have rewritten all occurrences *except one* of the words "you" and "your" from chapters 1 through 10 of the spec (working from michael's newer draft from yesterday). this includes not only "you can" but also a few scattered others. i'll send the revised document straight to michael because i don't know if i can upload a draft myself. the one occurrence i did not change -- but we should -- is at the bottom of page 370. i think my brain is too addled this late in the day to figure out a reasonable rewording of this paragraph. maybe i'll be able to think more clearly later, or maybe someone else can beat me to it. i will probably not be in the office tomorrow, but i can pick up again wherever things are left off on friday. mag -- <b>TOM MAGLIERY</b> XML Technology Specialist 604.697.8705 mag@blastradius.com <b>BLAST RADIUS</b> XMetaL <http://www.xmetal.com/> > -----Original Message----- > From: Michael Brauer [mailto:Michael.Brauer@Sun.COM] > Sent: Wednesday, November 24, 2004 8:08 AM > To: Tom Magliery > Cc: office > Subject: Re: [office] "you can" > > > Tom, all > > I've uploaded a temporary working draft that contains the progress I > made in remving "you can" today at: > > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/download.p > hp/10246/office-spec.sxw > Magliery wrote: > > Actually, I have replaced the following terms starting with section 7. > > "The attributes that you can associate" > "The attributes you can associate" > "The attributes you can use" > -> "The attributes that may be associated" > > "The attribute that you can associate" > "The only attribute that you can associate" > -> "The only attribute that may be associated" > > "The elements that you can include" > -> "The elements that my be included" > > As suggested by Tim, I've checked the the attribute list > match with the > descriptions that follow. > > I've also rewrote the remaining sentences that contain "you can" in > chapters 7, 8, 9 and in the beginning of chapter 10. > > If you plan to do some editing work, please switch to the new draft. > > Thanks > > Michael > > > To unsubscribe from this mailing list (and be removed from > the roster of the OASIS TC), go to > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/members/le > ave_workgroup.php. > >
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