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Subject: Re: [office] Groups - OpenDocument-v1.3-wd09-part2-packages.odt uploaded
Greetings, Will note this tomorrow but prepping part 2 and: ***** Inconsistent use with base64, 'a base64Binary sequence' (4.12) or 'a base64-encoded' (4.13) or 'in BASE64 encoding' (4.16.2, 4.16.5) or 'encoded as base64binary' (4.16.12) ***** base64Binary is a built-in data type of XML, so for consistency: 4.12 -> a base64Binary sequence 4.13 -> a base64Binary encoded 4.16.2 -> in a base64Binary encoding 4.16.5 -> in a base64Binary encoded sequence (deleting binary as redundant) 4.16.12 -> as a base64Binary value (adding value and correcting case in the name of the datatype) Hope everyone is having a great weekend! Patrick On 8/9/19 6:11 PM, Regina Henschel wrote: > Hi Patrick, > > The following notes are not intended to be a reason to postpone a > committee draft, therefore I do not create an issue. If we stop on > each typo, we will never get a new version. It is not possible to make > an error free text of such length. > Only the different version numbers should be clarified, because that > hits automatic validation. > > content > -------- > Page 15 > item 4.11 Does element <PGPData> contain something related to signatures? > > Page 20 > item 4.16.14.3, The schema has value "1.3", the text value "1.2". > > > editorial > --------- > The Working Draft number is not consistent: 07 in Title, wd06 in > footer and wd09 in file name. > > Pages 6 and 7 > {Schneier-Errata] either Normative or Non-Normative > > Page 8 > Suspicious [RNG] in item E) > > Page 15 > item 4.8, The e in encrypted-key is not part of the "element" > character style. > item 4.9, The word 'element' should have default character style. > > Page 16 > item 4.12, The words 'element contains' should have default character > style. > item 4.13, The word 'element' should have default character style. > > Page 16 > item 4.14, 4.15 It is not good to have in both cases the word > 'contains'. In case of CipherValue 'contains' is correct, because the > raw encrypted data are the direct content of the element. But in case > of CipherData the encrypted data is not the direct content. > [xmldsig-core1] has the wording 'envelopes' in that case. > > Inconsistent use with base64, 'a base64Binary sequence' (4.12) or 'a > base64-encoded' (4.13) or 'in BASE64 encoding' (4.16.2, 4.16.5) or > 'encoded as base64binary' (4.16.12) > > Page 18 > item 4.16.7, The second 'For a ' should be aligned with the first one. > > > Kind regards > Regina > > > > > Patrick Durusau schrieb am 07-Aug-19 um 03:58: >> /Submitter's message/ >> Greetings! >> >> Apologies for the delay but the light finally came on for the PGP >> encryption element additions. Not nearly as difficult as I thought it >> would be. >> >> I will post a clean version tomorrow with a view of preparing for a >> vote on a committee draft. >> >> Hope everyone is having a great week! >> >> Patrick >> -- Patrick Durusau >> *Document Name*: OpenDocument-v1.3-wd09-part2-packages.odt >> <https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/document.php?document_id=65742> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> *Description* >> All issues applied. >> Download Latest Revision >> <https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/office/download.php/65742/latest/OpenDocument-v1.3-wd09-part2-packages.odt> >> Public Download Link >> <https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/document.php?document_id=65742&wg_abbrev=office> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> *Submitter*: Patrick Durusau >> *Group*: OASIS Open Document Format for Office Applications >> (OpenDocument) TC >> *Folder*: 1.3 Drafts >> *Date submitted*: 2019-08-06 18:57:46 >> > -- Patrick Durusau patrick@durusau.net Technical Advisory Board, OASIS (TAB) Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300 Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps) Another Word For It (blog): http://tm.durusau.net Homepage: http://www.durusau.net Twitter: patrickDurusau
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