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Subject: Non-material changes and comment log
Greetings! I kept a log of my responses to comments by the TC Admin and Regina (thanks!) which is attached. I am posting this to the mailing list along with the draft versions to our document repository. Log is attached. Hope everyone is at the start of a great week! Patrick -- Patrick Durusau patrick@durusau.net Technical Advisory Board, OASIS (TAB) Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300 Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps) Another Word For It (blog): http://tm.durusau.net Homepage: http://www.durusau.net Twitter: patrickDurusau
Response to Paul's comments on the latest drafts: General: - Some Normative References appear to be outdated. Marina Latini also noted something similar [3]. Patrick - To respond would require tracking which sections of XSL were updated by CSS to determine if they have changed the definitions we use. Patrick - If those definitions have changed, that could impact current implementations, which is not the aim of this point release. Patrick - If those definitions have not changed, then the current citations are sufficient. - Many Normative References do not have active hyperlinks, even when a URL is shown as text. OASIS TC Administration recommends using active links. Patrick - Citations made into hyperlinks for part 2: [OWL] Deborah L. McGuinness, Frank van Harmelen, OWL Web Ontology Language Overview, http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-owl-features-20040210/, W3C, 2004. [PNG] David Duce, Portable Network Graphics (PNG) Specification (Second Edition), http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/REC-PNG-20031110, W3C, 2003. [RDF-CONCEPTS] Graham Klyne, Jeremy J. Carroll, Brian McBride, Resource Description Framework (RDF): Concepts and Abstract Syntax, http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-rdf-concepts-20040210/, W3C, 2004. [RDF-XML] Dave Beckett, Brian McBride, RDF/XML Syntax Specification (Revised), http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-rdf-syntax-grammar-20040210/, W3C, 2004. [RFC2898] B. Kaliski, PKCS #5: Password-Based Cryptography Specification Version 2.0, http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2898.txt, IETF, 2000. [RFC3174] D. Eastlake, 3rd, P. Jones, US Secure Hash Algorithm 1 (SHA1), http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3174.txt, IETF, 2001. [RFC3986] T. Berners-Lee, R. Fielding, L. Masinter, Uniform Resource Identifier (URI): Generic Syntax, http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3986.txt, IETF, 2005. [RFC3987] M. Duerst, M. Suignard, Internationalized Resource Identifiers (IRIs), http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3987.txt, IETF, 2005. [XML1.0] Tim Bray, Jean Paoli, C. M. Sperberg-McQueen, Eve Maler, FranÃois Yergeau , Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Fourth Edition), http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xml-20060816/, W3C, 2004. [XML-ID] Jonathan Marsh, Daniel Veillard, Norman Walsh, xml:id Version 1.0, http://www.w3.org/TR/2005/REC-xml-id-20050909/, W3C, 2005. [xml-names] Tim Bray et al., Namespaces in XML 1.0 (Second Edition), http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xml-names-20060816, W3C, 2006. [xmlenc-core] Donald Eastlake, Joseph Reagle, XML Encryption Syntax and Processing, http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/REC-xmlenc-core-20021210/, W3C, 2002. [xmlschema-2] Paul V. Biron, Ashok Malhotra, XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes Second Edition, http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-xmlschema-2-20041028/, W3C, 2004. [xmldsig-core] Donald Eastlake, Joseph Reagle, David Solo, Frederick Hirsch, Thomas Roessler, XML Signature Syntax and Processing (Second Edition), http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xmldsig-core-20080610/, W3C, 2008. [ZIP] PKWARE Inc. Zip APPNOTE Version 6.2.0, available at http://www.pkware.com/support/application-note-archives, 2004 Patrick: Standard notation for ISO/IEC standards do not include hyperlinks. 1.4 Non Normative References [Schneier-Errata] Bruce Schneir, Applied Cryptography 2nd. Ed. - Errata, http://www.schneier.com/book-applied-errata.html, 1998. Patrick - Citations into hyperlinks for part 3: [CSS2] Bert Bos, HÃkon Wium Lie, Chris Lilley, Ian Jacobs, Cascading Style Sheets, level 2, http://www.w3.org/TR/1998/REC-CSS2-19980512, W3C, 1998. [changed style to bibliography in addition to hyperlink] [CSS3Text] Michel Suignard, CSS3 Text Module, http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/CR-css3-text-20030514, W3C, 2003. [DAISY] ANSI/NISO Z39.86-2005 Specifications for the Digital Talking Book, http://www.niso.org/standards/resources/Z39-86-2005.html, 2005. [DCMI] Dublin Core Metadata Element Set, Version 1.1: Reference Description, http://www.dublincore.org/documents/2008/01/14/dces/, Dublin Core Metadata Initiative, 2003. [DOMEvents2] Tom Pixley, Document Object Model (DOM) Level 2 Events Specification, http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/REC-DOM-Level-2-Events-20001113, W3C, 2000. [GRDDL] Don Conolly, Gleaning Resource Descriptions from Dialects of Languages (GRDDL), http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-grddl-20070911/, W3C, 2007. [HTML4] Dave Raggett, Arnaud Le Hors, Ian Jacobs, HTML 4.01 Specification, http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/REC-html401-19991224, W3C, 1999. [RFC6838] Freed, N., Klensin, J., and T. Hansen, "Media Type Specifications and Registration Procedures", BCP 13, RFC 6838, DOI 10.17487/RFC6838, January 2013, <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc6838>. [formated as bibliography] [MathML] David Carlisle, Patrick Ion, Robert Miner, Nico Poppelier, Mathematical Markup Language (MathML) Version 2.0 (Second Edition), http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/REC-MathML2-20031021/, W3C, 2003. [MIMETYPES] MIME Media Types, http://www.iana.org/assignments/media-types/, IANA. [ODF10] OASIS Standard, Open Document Format for Office Applications (OpenDocument) v1.0, May 2005, http://docs.oasis-open.org/office/v1.0/OpenDocument-v1.0-os.pdf [ODF11] OASIS Standard, Open Document Format for Office Applications (OpenDocument) v1.1, February 2007, http://docs.oasis-open.org/office/v1.1/OS/OpenDocument-v1.1.pdf [OWL] Deborah L. McGuinness, Frank van Harmelen, OWL Web Ontology Language Overview, http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-owl-features-20040210/, W3C, 2004. [PNG] David Duce, Portable Network Graphics (PNG) Specification (Second Edition), http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/REC-PNG-20031110, W3C, 2003. [RDF-CONCEPTS] Graham Klyne, Jeremy J. Carroll, Brian McBride, Resource Description Framework (RDF): Concepts and Abstract Syntax, http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-rdf-concepts-20040210/, W3C, 2004. [RDFa] Ben Adida, Mark Birbeck, Shane McCarron, Steven Pemberton, RDFa in XHTML: Syntax and Processing, http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-rdfa-syntax-20081014, W3C, 2008. [RFC2045] N. Freed and N. Borenstein, Multipurpose Internet Mail Extensions (MIME) Part One: Format of Internet Message Bodies, http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2045.txt, IETF, 1996. [RFC2616] R. Fielding, et al., Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1, http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2616.txt, IETF, 1999. [RFC3066] H. Alvestrand, Tags for the Identification of Languages, http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3066.txt, IETF, 2001. [RFC3987] M. Duerst, M. Suignard, Internationalized Resource Identifiers (IRIs), http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3987.txt, IETF, 2005 [RFC4514] K. Zeilenga, Lightweight Directory Access Protocol (LDAP): String Representation of Distinguished Names, http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4514, IETF, 2006. [RFC5646] A. Phillips, M. Davis, Tags for Identifying Languages, http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc5646.txt, IETF, 2009. [RFC6838] N. Freed, J. Klensin, T. Hansen Media Type Specifications and Registration Procedures, http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc6838.txt, IETF, 2013. [SMIL20] Jeff Ayars, etc al., Synchronized Multimedia Integration Language (SMIL 2.0) - [Second Edition], http://www.w3.org/TR/2005/REC-SMIL2-20050107/, W3C, 2001. [SVG] Jon Ferraiolo, èæ æ (FUJISAWA Jun), Dean Jackson, Scalable Vector Graphics (SVG) 1.1, http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/REC-SVG11-20030114/, W3C, 2003. [UAX9] Mark Davis, The Bidirectional Algorithm, Unicode Standard Annex #9, http://www.unicode.org/reports/tr9/tr9-15.html, 2005. [UTR18] Mark Davis, Andy Heninger, Unicode Regular Expressions, Unicode Technical Report #18, http://www.unicode.org/reports/tr18/tr18-13.html, 2008. [UTR20] Martin DÃrst and Asmus Freytag, Unicode in XML and other Markup Languages, Unicode Technical Report #20, http://www.unicode.org/reports/tr20/tr20-7.html, 2003. [XForms] John M. Boyer, XForms 1.0 (Third Edition), http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-xforms-20071029/, W3C, 2007. [XLink] Steve DeRose, Eve Maler, David Orchard, XML Linking Language (XLink) Version 1.0, http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/REC-xlink-20010627/, W3C, 2001. [XML-ID] Jonathan Marsh, Daniel Veillard, Norman Walsh, xml:id Version 1.0, http://www.w3.org/TR/2005/REC-xml-id-20050909/, W3C, 2005. [XML-Names] Tim Bray rt al., Namespaces in XML 1.0 (Second Edition), http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xml-names-20060816, W3C, 2006. [XML1.0] Tim Bray, Jean Paoli, C. M. Sperberg-McQueen, Eve Maler, FranÃois Yergeau , Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Fourth Edition), http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xml-20060816/, W3C, 2006. [XMLENC-CORE] Donald Eastlake, Joseph Reagle, XML Encryption Syntax and Processing, http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/REC-xmlenc-core-20021210/, W3C, 2002. [XPath] James Clark, Steve DeRose, XML Path Language (XPath) Version 1.0, http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/REC-xpath-19991116, W3C, 1999. [XMLSchema-2] Paul V. Biron, Ashok Malhotra, XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes Second Edition, http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-xmlschema-2-20041028/, W3C, 2004. [XSL] Sharon Adler, et al., Extensible Stylesheet Language (XSL), http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/REC-xsl-20011015/, W3C, 2001. [XSLT] James Clark, XSL Transformations (XSLT) Version 1.0, http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/REC-xslt-19991116, W3C, 1999. Citations inserted for Part 4: [CharModel] Martin J. DÃrst, et. al., Character Model for the World Wide Web 1.0: Fundamentals, http://www.w3.org/TR/2005/REC-charmod-20050215/, W3C, 2005. [RFC3986] T. Berners-Lee, R. Fielding, L. Masinter, Uniform Resource Identifier (URI): Generic Syntax, http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3986.txt, IETF, 2005. [RFC3987] M. Duerst, M. Suignard, Internationalized Resource Identifiers (IRIs), http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3987.txt, IETF, 2005. [UNICODE] The Unicode Consortium. The Unicode Standard, Version 5.2.0, defined by: The Unicode Standard, Version 5.2 (Mountain View, CA, The Unicode Consortium, 2009. ISBN 978-1-936213-00-9). (http://www.unicode.org/versions/Unicode5.2.0/). [UTR15] Mark Davis, Martin DÃrst, Unicode Normalization Forms, Unicode Technical Report #15, http://www.unicode.org/reports/tr15/tr15-25.html, 2005. [XML1.0] Tim Bray, Jean Paoli, C. M. Sperberg-McQueen, Eve Maler, FranÃois Yergeau , Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Fourth Edition), http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xml-20060816/, W3C, 2006. 1.5 Non-Normative References [JISX0201] The Unicode Consortium., JIS X 0201 (1976) to Unicode 1.1 Table, 1994, http://www.unicode.org/Public/MAPPINGS/OBSOLETE/EASTASIA/JIS/JIS0201.TXT. [JISX0208] The Unicode Consortium., JIS X 0208 (1990) to Unicode, 1994, http://www.unicode.org/Public/MAPPINGS/OBSOLETE/EASTASIA/JIS/JIS0208.TXT. [UAX11] Asmus Freytag, East Asian Width, Unicode Standard Annex #11, http://www.unicode.org/reports/tr11/tr11-19.html, 2009. - When the Parts were renumbered for Version 1.3, some references to the part numbers were not updated (apparently). See specific examples for Part 2 and Part 3 below. Patrick - Corrected. Part 2: Packages - In Section 1.5, the first line mentions "part 3", but it apparently should be "Part 2", the current Part. "part 3" also appears in the title of Table 1. Patrick - Corrected - good catch - The hyperlink to [ZIP] in Appendix C of Part 2 [4] is broken in the XHTML version, since it is rendered as "https://docs.oasis-open.org/office/OpenDocument/v1.3/csprd02/part2-packages/available%20at%20http://www.pkware.com/support/application-note-archives";. In this case, the link (in Normative References) is also outdated, and should be either https://www.pkware.com/documents/APPNOTE/APPNOTE-6.2.0.txt or maybe link to the page where PKWARE specifically calls out the use of ZIP in the Office Open XML File Formats, at https://support.pkware.com/display/PKZIP/Application+Note+Archives. Patrick: There is no hyperlink in Appendix C of part 2, there was a bibliography reference that should have been a cross-ref to zip in the normative references. Open issue: Ref to use for ZIP - deferred to the TC Part 3: Schema - In Section 1.5, Table 6, there is a reference to "Part2" which is probably intended to be "Part 4". Patrick: Corrected. - Section 1.5 mentions "Tables 1-4", but there are six following tables, and the text appears to refer to all six. Patrick: Corrected. - There are two broken links noted in the text: -- the Non-normative reference to [BibTeXing] is not correct (site reports the document has been removed) Regina suggests: ***** I suggest https://www.ctan.org/tex-archive/biblio/bibtex/base We would need to add, that it is file "btxdoc.pdf" from that list. Or use its link, that is http://mirrors.ctan.org/biblio/bibtex/base/btxdoc.pdf The actual download comes from a mirror then. ***** Thoughts? -- the text link in Appendix D.4 to ODF accessibility guidelines is broken/incomplete. A correct link is https://docs.oasis-open.org/office/office-accessibility/v1.0/ODF_Accessibility_Guidelines-v1.0.html. Patrick: Corrected. [1] https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office-comment/201909/msg00002.html [2] https://docs.oasis-open.org/office/OpenDocument/v1.3/csprd01/OpenDocument-v1.3-csprd01-comment-resolution-log.txt [3] https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office/201911/msg00016.html [4] link to Appendix C of Part 2: https://docs.oasis-open.org/office/OpenDocument/v1.3/csprd02/part2-packages/OpenDocument-v1.3-csprd02-part2-packages.html#__RefHeading__752917_826425813 ************************************** Other comments: Regina: There are two "Reference source not found" in 19.191 draw:mime-type in part3. Because after that, there is [RFC6838], I think, these can be simple deleted. Patrick: Corrected. Regina: the paragraph Note 2 in section 2.3.1 OpenDocument Formular Evaluator in part 4 has the paragraph style "Text Body". It should be paragraph style "Note", same as paragraph Note 1. Patrick: Corrected.
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