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Subject: Comments on the draft spec ver 0.9
I am resending the comments since the previously attached document refers only to a subset of my comments. <<comments on the SPML 0.9 version spec.doc>> The changed text appears in Bold & Underline 1. In the glossary - 5.1.1.13 (“Provisioning”): “…restoration of a defined set of accounts…” 2. Section 5.3 should be revised since all is included in one file. In this respect, the XML namespace is urn:oasis:names:tc:spml:1.0 3. Section 6.1, line 255: “…as its formal (?) definition…” 4. Section 7.1, line 374: “…name=(multi)value pairs.” 5. Section 7.1, line 374: “To complement this…” 6. Section 7.2.1, line 400: “…issues SPML requests is said…” 7. Section 7.2.1, line 403: “Example RAs…” 8. Section 7.2.2, line 413: “Example PSPs…” 9. Section 7.2.3, line 419: “…source like an NT domain…” (btw - shouldn’t all such names be trademarked appropriately?) 10. Section 7.2.3, line 426: “…functioning as a PSP…”. The fragment “(or PSP)” should be revised or removed. 11. Section 7.2.4, line 431: “…represents a unique…”. Besides, I think that a clearer explanation should follow, before the example. 12. Section 7.2.4, line 453: “The PSO-ID relationship with…” 13. Section 7.2.4, line 453: “…represents one of many possible…” 14. Section 7.3.1, line 496 (example): “<spml:identifier identifiertype=…” this repeats several times throughout the document. 15. Section 7.3.2, line 506 (example): “<spml:modification name=…” (opening and closing) 16. Section 7.3.3, line 518 (example): “<spml:identifier identifiertype=…” 17. Section 7.3.4, line 537 (example): “<spml:searchBase identifiertype=…” 18. Section 7.3.4, line 537 (example): “<spml:identifier…” 19. Section 7.3.4, line 537 (example): “<spml:attributes …” (opening and closing) 20. Section 7.3.4, line 550 (example): “<spml:identifier identifiertype=…” 21. Section 7.3.4, line 550 (example): “<spml:identifier…” 22. Section 7.3.5, line 557: “…of this document.” 23. Section 7.3.5, line 560 (example): “<spml:identifier identifiertype=…” 24. Section 7.3.6, line 585: “…malformedRequest to…” 25. Section 7.3.7, line 610 (example): several things - a. the ProviderIdentifier should be added b. instead of <spml:identifier operationIDType=…” it should be “<spml:operationIdentifier type=…” c. instead of <spml:identifier IdentifierType=…” it should be “<spml:Identifier type=…”; d. Almost the same remarks apply to examples in line 626 and 628 (btw - why 2 examples?) 26. Section 7.3.7, line 612: “Using the <ExtendedResponse> …” 27. Section 7.3.7, line 616: “…defines a mandatory <providerIdentifier>…” 28. Section 7.4.1, line 641 (example): “<spml:identifier identifiertype=…” 29. Section 7.4.2, line 648: “…service schema definition model both implement a <providerIdentifier> element.” 30. Section 7.4.2, lines 652 and 654: “…control the globally-unique identification…” 31. Section 7.4.2, lines 670-671: “…in which the RA holds open its “execution” call and awaits its completion. In the asynchronous model, the RA issues its _____…” 32. Section 7.5.2, line 683 (example): “…statusResults=…” 33. Section 7.5.2, line 686: ”…by the <StatusReturnsType> element…” 34. Section 7.5.2, line 693: ”…with “statusReturns=urn:oasis:names:tc:spml:1.0#result”…” 35. Section 7.5.2, line 695 (example): “statusReturns=urn:oasis:names:tc:spml:1.0#result”…” 36. Section 7.5.2, line 696 (example): a. Instead of “statusResults” - “Result” b. instead of <spml:identifier IdentifierType=…” it should be “<spml:identifier type=…” c. instead of <spml:identifier …” it should be “<spml:id…”; d. <spml:SearchResultEntry> should be indented back. 37. Section 7.5.5, line 726: ”…a <BatchRequest> based…” 38. Section 7.5.5, line 729: ”…a <DeleteRequest> ,…” 39. Section 7.5.5, line 738: ”…both provide access to <operationalAttributes>. RAs…” 40. Section 7.5.5.1, line 742: ”…constructs a batch request…” Rami.
comments on the SPML 0.9 version spec.doc
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