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Subject: Fwd: comments: draft-sstc-saml1x-metadata-05 (should be draft-sstc-saml1x-metadata-06)
[this is a resend] ---------- Forwarded message ---------- From: Tom Scavo <trscavo@gmail.com> Date: Aug 1, 2006 5:42 PM Subject: comments: draft-sstc-saml1x-metadata-05 (should be draft-sstc-saml1x-metadata-06) To: oasis sstc <security-services@lists.oasis-open.org> Document identifier: draft-sstc-saml1x-metadata-05 (should be draft-sstc-saml1x-metadata-06) Previous comments are quoted below for context. Unquoted comments refer to the new document above. On 6/27/06, Tom Scavo <trscavo@gmail.com> wrote: > Document identifier: sstc-saml1x-metadata-cd-01 > > [line 73] Insert non-breaking space at the end of the line. [lines 79--80] Insert non-breaking space in this phrase "SAML V1.0". > [line 179] s/elements'/element's/ [line 202] s/elements'/element's/ (still true despite the change in wording) > [line 240] Change the URL to: > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/3405/oasis-sstc-saml-bindings-1.1.pdf > > [line 243] Change the URL to: > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/3406/oasis-sstc-saml-core-1.1.pdf Can we have permanent URLs to the SAML V1.1 standards? > [lines 245--246] Change the URL to: > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/18048/sstc-saml1x-metadata.xsd Finding the schema document will be difficult without a better URL. Some additional comments: [line 5] s/Draft 05/Draft 06/ [line 7] s/05/06/ (in the footnote as well) [lines 22--23] Delete the sentence "This is a Committee Draft approved by the Security Services Technical Committee on 15 March 2005." [table after line 71] The sentence "This is the SAML V2.0 metadata namespace defined in the SAML V2.0 metadata specification [SAML2Meta]." conflicts with phrases introduced in the latest versions of other documents. [lines 97--98] Insert non-breaking space in this phrase "SAML V2.0". [line 182, 209, 211] s/SAML 1.x/SAML V1.x/ [lines 203--204] Insert non-breaking space in this phrase "SAML V1.x". [line 339] Delete this line. Tom
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