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Subject: Re: [soa-rm-ra] Section 3 revision
Although I have done more edits since 6/29, they are no especially significant. However, I will post an absolutely up-to-date snapshot. Frank On Jul 13, 2010, at 6:08 AM, Rex Brooks wrote: > Hi Danny, Frank, Everyone, > > I have finally managed to clear my plate; begin work on new projects and re-engage ongoing work, which is the slot our RAF occupies in my priorities. > > So, is this all based on the snapshot as of 6-29-10? I just downloaded that file. > > I note that Frank's original message below was sent on 6-26-10 which also corresponds to the date of the last previous snapshot before 6-29-10 version I downloaded, and I want to be sure I am looking at the correct snapshot. What I see in the 6-29 snapshot includes the struck-through material. > > I want to make sure I'm reading and commenting on the same version as everyone else. > > Cheers, > Rex > > Thornton, Danny R (IS) wrote: >> I read through the updates for policies and contracts in Section 3 and >> Section 4. Section 4 policy modifications do incorporate separate >> definitions for policy decision and policy enforcement. >> >> In section 3.1.3, Shared State and Social Facts, Figure 9 has the >> labeled association 'perceives' between Participant and Social Fact. I >> would suggest leaving perception as a discussion for Section 3.2.3, >> Trust and Risk. One thing that raising a teenager teaches is that a >> person's perception of facts is often as unique as a fingerprint. It >> did not seem appropriate to discuss this in section 3.1.3. >> >> Section 3 and Section 4 duplicate the text on Permission and Obligation. >> I would remove the discussion of permissions and obligations from >> Section 3 and leave it in Section 4 and update Figure 10 and Figure 47 >> accordingly. >> Danny >> >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Francis McCabe [mailto:fmccabe@gmail.com] Sent: Saturday, June 26, 2010 1:43 PM >> To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org RA >> Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Section 3 revision >> >> I have 'gone through' section 3 reorganizing it and adjusting quite a >> lot of the text. I have added a preliminary version of architectural implications. There >> is likely to be further 'stuff' in this section. >> >> Occasionally, I felt that a slightly radical edit was required. In that >> case I kept the original text but with strike-through. >> >> Some diagrams will need to be updated. I have left comments where I >> could to signal the required change. >> >> Frank >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that >> generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: >> https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php >> >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that >> generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: >> https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php >> >> >> > > -- > Rex Brooks > President, CEO > Starbourne Communications Design > GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison > Berkeley, CA 94702 > Tel: 510-898-0670 >
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