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Subject: 1.05 proofreading pass
Take particular note of the changes in the following lines (numbered from the change PDF) and strike them if you consider them incorrect or excessive: 661-662 855-857 894-896 911-912 992-994 1020-1021 1243-1244 1318 1396-1397 1475-1481 1553-1558 1559-1565 I can't see how any of the remaining changes do anything other than correct punctuation, typos, grammar, style, or clarity; but likewise strike any of the others if you don't approve. Mark Peel Web Services Infrastructure Novell, Inc.
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