UBL Library Content
Review Comment and Disposition Form
Reviewer [your name]:
	NDR QA Team, Mattew Gertner
Contact Details[your email]:
Date:
20 December 2002
Artifact/Version Reviewed[name of document]:
	Scope Document

UBL UID	Comment	Proposal	References	Disposition	Date	
	I wonder who the intended audience is for this document. If it is not only designed for business process experts, I would move the one sentence description of each business document type to the introduction, so that the subsequent discussion can be followed more easily.	In comment.				
	the first sentence is a bit goobledy-gookey with "function-rich scenarios" and what not. It might be worth expanding this to explain in more detail what the goals and the purpose of the document are	In comment.				

Matt’s final comment:  In terms of copy editing the doc is quite well-written. I caught a split infinitive or two, but then I am a pedant. :-) Of course I'll happily reread if for language when it is nearer finalization.