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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (MQTT-100) Editorial comments on the Abstract (page 1)
Editorial comments on the Abstract (page 1) ------------------------------------------- Key: MQTT-100 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-100 Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC Issue Type: Improvement Components: edits Reporter: Peter Niblett Priority: Minor 1. line 22 These sentence "These characteristics make it ideal for use in constrained environments, for example, but not limited to:" reads awkwardly. How about a splitting it into two, , "These characteristics make it ideal for use in constrained environments,. These include environments: 2. Line 24 uses the word "unreliable". When writing the charter we tried to avoid that word, as it has negative connotations if you are a telco. Actiually the charter provides the following overall summary.. "Providing a lightweight publish/subscribe reliable messaging transport protocol suitable for communication in M2M/IoT contexts where a small code footprint is required and/or network bandwidth is at a premium." which we could use somewhere on this page. 3. Line 29. Add words "The use of" at the start 4. Line 32 explicitly mentions TCP/IP. 5. Line 35. This refers to QoS 0 as "At most once" but then goes on to say that Duplication can occur... This is actually a wider issue as this wording appears elsewhere in the spec 6. Line 43. I suggest deleting the words "using the Last Will and Testament feature" , since we don't use this term anywhere else. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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