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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (ODATA-21) Feedback to document revision
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ODATA-21?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=31004#action_31004 ] Ralf Handl commented on ODATA-21: --------------------------------- Good feedback. Removed the references from the abstract and split the Schema references in two as proposed and changed to standalone="yes". Side remark the NetFlix service is the only service I found that actually uses this declaration, and it uses "true" :-) I am somewhat struggling with the reformulated abstract and introduction: - CSDL is (an) XML (dialect) defined with an XML Schema and additional prose text, so "articulated in" and "based upon" don't resonate with me. @Native speakers: please help. - "Many representations of such models are possible. CSDL defines one representation" sounds somewhat misleading as we don't have another representation at the moment. - EDMX wrapper: the proposed text is more readable, but less exact as the wrapper actually consists of an <edmx:Edmx> root element and a nested <edmx:DataServices> element around the top-level <csdl:Schema> element. Putting that into the introduction makes it more exact and less readable, so I am at a loss here what to do. The bookmark names btw. reflect the section numbering of the contributed document, so they are one off on the top level. > Feedback to document revision > ----------------------------- > > Key: ODATA-21 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ODATA-21 > Project: OASIS Open Data Protocol (OData) TC > Issue Type: Improvement > Components: OData CSDL v1.0 > Affects Versions: WD01 > Reporter: Stefan Drees > Assignee: Ralf Handl > Priority: Minor > Fix For: WD01 > > > Several feedback items have been identified. These are listed in the comment as one document since they are partially related and to not flood the editor with at least 5 isolated issues. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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