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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (SOAEERP-10) PR08-E2 WhitePaper-cd03 Section: *EERP Technology*
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-10?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=19277#action_19277 ] Paul Yang commented on SOAEERP-10: ----------------------------------- http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37746/EERP-Model-UseCase-WhitePaper-cd03-diff-wd08.pdf bullet #3: "* In the second paragraph of SubSection: *Enablers for Optimization: ..." page 6, change has been made bullet #4: "Suggestion for next to last paragraph of SubSection: *Status of Standards Process..." page 7, change has been made > PR08-E2 WhitePaper-cd03 Section: *EERP Technology* > ---------------------------------------------------- > > Key: SOAEERP-10 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-10 > Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC > Issue Type: Sub-task > Components: PR Comments > Reporter: Paul Yang > > * I would like to commend you on the explanation given in > SubSection: *Enablers for Optimization:* > * Specifically, I am very pleased that "The focus of the SOA-EERP > Technical Committee is on enablers for optimization and process > improvement rather than on the complete EERP environment." This > was an unspoken concern of mine early on, and it puts the entire > complement of specifications into a sound perspective. (Note: I > didn't intend to start with agreement and commendation. I must be > slipping!") > * In the second paragraph of SubSection: *Enablers for Optimization: > *the parenthetical phrase "(how to represent cost, time, and > cost)," is clumsy. Perhaps "(how to represent cost, time, and > intended result)," might be better. (Note: the term we use in the > SOA-RAF for intended "result" would be intended "Real World Effect.") > * Suggestion for next to last paragraph of SubSection: *Status of > Standards Process:* "These XML vocabulary specifications address > the exchange of information that models the business > characteristics of a service, permits assertions or queries > related to the credibility of the service and its provider, and > the establishment of agreements about the _*use of*_ business service. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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