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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (SOAEERP-14) PR08-E6SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pdf
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-14?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=19304#action_19304 ] Paul Yang commented on SOAEERP-14: ----------------------------------- http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37739/SOA-EERP-Rating-Spec-cd03-diff-wd08.doc * Line 3: Suggestion "... information exchange on business *credibility *reliability and reputation specific rating measurement indicators.*_" -line 3, done * Line 8: Suggestiion "The *credibility*, reliability and reputation..." -line 14, done * Line 85: Suggestion: "_*The XML vocabulary for Business Rating is defined in the XML Schema for this specification with several specific rating measurement indicators.*_ -line 93-93, editing error, "the is defined", please remove "the" * Lines 111-113 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind of body text and should be changed to match the overall style. -line 120-121, done * Lines 111-113: grammatical error (111, 112) and suggestion (112): "Performance:QualityAssestionEvaluation that will _*provide*_ a mechanism for Service Rating Entities to _*render*_ their evaluation for how well the Service Provider _*fulfills*_ the Quality Assertion(s) of its service." -line 120-121, done * Line 131: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 140, done * Line 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 149, done * Lines 145, 146: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 159, done * Line 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized elements MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 162, done * Line 157: remove white space in element name: An aggregated number, in _*<rt:RatingNumeric>*_ element." -line 172, done * Line 187: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 205, done * Lines 202, 203: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 222, done * Lines 212, 213: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 234, done * Lines 218, 219: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 242, done * Lines 226-228 re formatted in a different typeface/font from the style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind of body text and should be changed to match the overall style. -line 248-250, done * Lines 227, 228: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 253, done * Lines 234-235: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 262, done * Line 284: Suggestion: "_*Unlike *_the Rating element..." -line 313, done * Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 352, done * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 371, done * Lines 341, 342: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 377, done * Lines 351, 352: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 389, done * Lines 361, 362: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 401, done * Lines 369, 370: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 411, done * Lines 376, 377: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 420, done * Lines 383, 384: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 429, done * Lines 390, 391: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." -line 438, done * Lines 393, 394: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_. -line 444, done > PR08-E6 SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pdf > ------------------------------------------ > > Key: SOAEERP-14 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-14 > Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC > Issue Type: Sub-task > Components: PR Comments > Reporter: Paul Yang > > * Line 3: Suggestion "... information exchange on business > *credibility *reliability and reputation..." > * Line 8: Suggestiion "The *credibility*, reliability and reputation..." > * Line 85: Suggestion: "_*The XML vocabulary for Business Rating is > defined in the XML Schema for this specification with several > specific rating measurement indicators.*_" > * Lines 111-113 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the > style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind > of body text and should be changed to match the overall style. > * Lines 111-113: grammatical error (111, 112) and suggestion (112): > "Performance:QualityAssestionEvaluation that will _*provide*_ a > mechanism for Service Rating Entities to _*render*_ their > evaluation for how well the Service Provider _*fulfills*_ the > Quality Assertion(s) of its service." > * Line 131: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY > cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY > cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 145, 146: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized elements MAY cause > a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 157: remove white space in element name: An aggregated > number, in _*<rt:RatingNumeric>*_ element." > * Line 187: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY > cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 202, 203: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 212, 213: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 218, 219: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 226-228 re formatted in a different typeface/font from the > style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind > of body text and should be changed to match the overall style. > * Lines 227, 228: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 234-235: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY > cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 284: Suggestion: "_*Unlike *_the Rating element..." > * Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 341, 342: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 351, 352: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 361, 362: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 369, 370: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 376, 377: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 383, 384: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 390, 391: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 393, 394: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_. > * Lines 453, 454 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the > style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind > of body text and should be changed to match the overall style. > * Lines 458-460 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the > style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind > of body text and should be changed to match the overall style. > * Lines 579-582 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the > style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind > of body text and should be changed to match the overall style. > * Line 609-611: grammatical errors, suggestion: "...implementation > silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute > is allowed, or silently _*ignores *_unrecognized elements where > any element is allowed, should be considered _*an*_ interoperable > implementation." -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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