ebMS3-part2-csd-02_rcc_review.odt Details

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Description OASIS ebXML Messaging version 3.0 Part 2, Advanced Features, voted Committee Draft 02 on November 03.

ODF version.
Group OASIS ebXML Messaging Services TC
Folder Specifications
Submitter Mr. Pim van der Eijk
Date Submitted Friday, 04 February 2011 09:50am
Document State Draft (A preliminary unapproved sketch, outline, or version.)
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Document Revisions
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2011-03-30
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2011-02-16
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2011-02-15
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2011-02-13
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2011-02-09
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2011-02-07
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2011-02-04
This doc
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2010-12-09
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2010-11-10
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2010-11-03
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2010-11-03
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Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2010-11-03

Comments  
Subject & Text Submitter Date Action
Initial comment by submitter
- need active links from Table of Contents to the sections and subsections

DONE (and I learned something new about OpenOffice today!)

- The XSD schema files and any machine-readable files need a
copyright notice, minimally "Copyright (c) OASIS 2011. All rights reserved"

NOT DONE: Robin, if you can do that as part of updating the CSD02 directory?

- update the Revision History

DONE

- need improved links for some of the Related Work resources on cover page

DONE

- need a resource-specific URI reference (link) for the XSD in
Appendix B 'Refactored ebMS 3.0 Core XML Schema'

NOT DONE: Robin, can you please update this? It depends on where you are going to store the XSD, I don't want to make a mistake here.

Can you also add a similar URL to Appendix I ?

- several incorrect or infelicitous references where the URI reference
is generic (version agnostic, "Latest") and dereferences to a
different Version/Edition/Revision/Draft than the one presented
with specific title and publication date

DONE

- URI reference for "[EBMS3CORE] OASIS Standard" is incorrect, citing
"Committee Specification 02, 12 July 2007" needs to be:
http://docs.oasis-open.org/ebxml-msg/ebms/v3.0/core/ebms_core-3.0-spec.pdf

DONE
Mr. Pim van der Eijk
2011-02-04
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