Hi Robert,
thx for sharing the draft. In addition to Gershon’s comments there are only two minor typos.
Best regards/viele Grüße
Carsten
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Subject: [dita] RE: Stage 2 proposal for review - "impose-role" attribute
Hi Robert,
I have reviewed the draft. I think it’s solid. I added comments to clarify or correct a few things.
Cheers,
Gershon
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From: Robert Anderson <robert.dan.anderson@oracle.com>
Sent: Wednesday, June 29, 2022 12:30 AM
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Subject: Stage 2 proposal for review - "impose-role" attribute
Hi Carsten and Gershon (and anyone else who wants to join in the stage 2 review),
I've attached the stage 2 proposal for the "Impose role" use case. Please let me know if you have any questions or suggested updates.
Thanks,
Robert