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Description of Damir Nesic comments on the initial draft

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Submitted By Mr. Damir Nesic on 2019-04-15 2:04 pm UTC

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This presentation summarizes the comments by Damir Nesic on the initial draft. The presentation groups the comments into the ones about: i) clarity of text, ii) structure of the document, iii) correctness of the text, and iv) independence w.r.t. the XML serialization.